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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-06-02 03:23 PM



Loving you through barriers
over land, lines, & sea
I've never laid an eye on you
you've never laid eyes on me
yet, I know you're beautiful
I know your heart is kind
I know that your words,
softly spoken & sweet, are
often genuine
I love you because of who you are
& loving you makes me free
I love you for this reason too:
you inspire me...


~Tier{R.T.}
1997

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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1 posted 2001-06-02 03:25 PM


How beautiful.  What a wonderful sentiment.
Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-06-02 03:28 PM


Thank you, Interloper!

*smiles*

~Tier

brian madden
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3 posted 2001-06-02 04:13 PM


Loving you through barriers
over land, lines, & sea
I've never laid an eye on you
you've never laid eyes on me
yet, I know you're beautiful
I know your heart is kind
I know that your words,


You may never know how much I can relate to this, I wish you well and hope that it goes well for both of you. Enjoyed the read.  

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-02 04:15 PM


Simply beautiful...James
Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-06-02 04:15 PM


And what a beautiful love it is.  Joyce
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-06-02 04:21 PM


What a beautiful tribute to someone who inspires you to this level Tiersdin ... much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Logan
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7 posted 2001-06-02 04:27 PM


Ahh, and I am sure the reverse was also true, how could it be not? lovely write...gentle smile
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8 posted 2001-06-02 04:47 PM


Tier, then this person is the luckiest person alive. . . to inspire such wonderful words. . .

excellent. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-06-02 10:03 PM


Tiersdin~

In reaching out ~ we reach within
Inspire of another ~ stirs our pen
Lovely words written ~ in heartfelt desire
Fills another ~ with inspire


Your write was beautifully sincere ...
and inspired my muse to jump right in !
Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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10 posted 2001-06-02 10:08 PM


Enjoyed this one so much.  Beautiful inspiration!
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11 posted 2001-06-02 10:15 PM


You know..I had an experience of feeling this way once. I notice this was written some time ago - if it's a relevant experience for you today then I hope it works out for you...I really do. Lovely poem Tier...

K


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12 posted 2001-06-02 10:35 PM


Beautiful write, Tier...it's a wonderful feeling to get inspiration from someone you've never seen!  Imagine when you do!!  I love this one...

sp  

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Saunni
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13 posted 2001-06-04 02:28 PM


So very beautiful! I have been reading your work and I really enjoy it!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Tiersdin
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14 posted 2001-06-04 06:35 PM


Thank you, Brian, James, Joyce, Kit, Sven, Margie {Thank you for that beautiful poem!}, Jlr, Severn, Snowpants, & Saunni, you are all such great writers yourself which makes me appreciate your comments that much more!

*smiles & hugs*
~Tier

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