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the parody of me
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the parody of me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I wish I'd bring you all with me through cat-slit eyes to make you see I wish you were all here with me within the parody of me... I wish that you would understand the flash of green and slight-of-hand when anyplace is better than every place I'd been before. I do not wish that you would know, what it is to want for more, and never feel a moment's peace--- I do not wish that you know me or my restlessness of pace the feeling of a thing that's caged or feel desire of a kick or relief of being sick... For no mercy will I cry no record be expunged with sigh no pretty tears from pretty eyes-- All this ugly? THIS IS ME. *sorry folks...can't seem to quit writing...and? so? guess I won't...smile* |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Don't stop writing, please.. enjoyed this read. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I enjoyed this too and am glad you will never quit writing. Joyce |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I wish that you would understand the flash of green and slight-of-hand when anyplace is better than every place I'd been before. Serenity, I am going to hold you to those words that you will never stop writing. When you said "all of this.. " you were meant to put the words talented poet instead of ugly. Take care of yourself and keep the paper wet with ink and the poetry flowing. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You have too much in you to quit...and you arent ugly...you have the loveliest spirit I know.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write on! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Please don't ever stop writing, I tried, couldn't do it.  Kathleen Blake |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And she writes on..and we read on..thanks S. Take care. Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
An excellent write Serenity ... a very powerful read.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do not wish that you would know, what it is to want for more, and never feel a moment's peace--- I do not wish that you know me or my restlessness of pace the feeling of a thing that's caged or feel desire of a kick or relief of being sick... For no mercy will I cry no record be expunged with sigh no pretty tears from pretty eyes-- All this ugly? THIS IS ME. ================================== Yeah...your the "ugliest" butterfly Ive ever seen ... I can hardlly stop looking at ya spreading your wings  and now Ill hush on the rest... and thank you for NOT stopping... YOU KNOW what I say to you... POST THEM PUPPIES!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
All this ugly? THIS IS ME. hmmmmmmm one should be so *ugly*, serenity...inside and out there is a beauty that we all see from your words...and picture *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You keep writing m'lady and I'll keep reading Maree |
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