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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-06-02 12:42 PM





I need someone to remind me
what love is all about
because I believe a file
has been corrupted & I cannot
access the true meaning...

perhaps the download
recieved from your heart
to mine was infected
& niether of us will work
properly without a total wipe
of bad memories

Back up the important
delete the useless
close your eyes & shut
down the old
for what is past, is past
the future holds promise
& the now is "present"
to be shared

once we reset the fax
send & recieve the right
messages, & mend
any broken links,
we should be able
to surf toghther smoothly
accessing the same page
as long as we remember,
it takes two...

are you ready to sign on?


~Tier{R.T.}
5/01

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-02 12:43 PM


That's the best worded ad I ever read....I hope you iron it all out....great poem!
Denise
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2 posted 2001-06-02 12:45 PM


Very creative piece of writing, Tier! I enjoyed this very much!
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
3 posted 2001-06-02 02:29 PM


Thank you, Ethome and Denise, I'm glad you liked!

*smiles*
~Tier

Sven
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4 posted 2001-06-02 04:55 PM


Tier, I'm ready. . . just give me the number. . . and make sure that I don't get disconnected. . .  

This is excellent. . . really original. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
5 posted 2001-06-02 05:08 PM


The number is, 555-HURRYUP&FINDME! *chuckles* thank you,Sven, I'm glad that you liked the poem!

~Tier

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-06-02 05:24 PM


Tier...what a wonderfully crafted write... just don't get those lines crossed when you cross the 'i' and dot the 't'...

'cause the excitement of the new connection can surely cause that to happen!


RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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7 posted 2001-06-02 05:32 PM


Tier...well done...very well done. Bob
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