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sans38
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since 2001-03-03
Posts 117
Westland, Michigan

0 posted 2001-06-02 12:03 PM



I want to watch the sun set
on the beach in Maine,
reminiscing of when we first met...
eating strawberries and sipping champagne.

I want to take a walk
and hold your hand.
Giggle and talk...
write you a love note in the sand.

I want to dance with you
beneath the glow of the moon,
celebrating our love anew...
hearts beating a happy tune.

I want to hold you close
give your lips a soft slow kiss,
sending tingles all the way to your toes...
filling your senses with pure bliss.

I want to be with you forever...and a day.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra Belisle - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-02 12:08 PM


Beautifully romantic and just as beautiful are the images!
Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-02 12:23 PM


this was oh so gentle an full of love,a treat to read  
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3 posted 2001-06-02 12:31 PM


HiSandra~
'Bout time you came back to play ~  

Lovely write.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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sans38
Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117
Westland, Michigan
4 posted 2001-06-02 12:38 PM


Thank you all very much for your kind words...I appreciate them a lot.

Marge....I still giggle over "The Singed Wing" incident. : )

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
5 posted 2001-06-02 01:23 PM


Tender and sweet. Such nice thoughts and forever is such a short time, so I am glad you added the day....gentle smile
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