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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-06-02 11:49 AM





fog cascades through trees
becomes forest waterfall
fallen trees river


"I am not now that which I have been."

© Copyright 2001 Mabel A. Dilley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-02 11:52 AM


beautiful pic julian..and of course the haiku is lovely too..

               ~Victoria~


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2 posted 2001-06-02 11:53 AM


What a pretty picture you've painted with this piece! Very nice indeed!
Mabel A. Dilley
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3 posted 2001-06-02 11:56 AM


Victoria and ethome: good morning from the Pacific NW!!

"I am not now that which I have been."

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4 posted 2001-06-02 12:25 PM


makes me want to rise early!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
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5 posted 2001-06-02 12:46 PM


Julian--Love it.  Nicely penned.

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6 posted 2001-06-02 02:36 PM


Now that was a pretty one!

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7 posted 2001-06-02 03:38 PM


Reminds me of my boyhood in the giant redwoods of northern California.
Thanks for refreshing my memory!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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8 posted 2001-06-02 11:20 PM


Julian~
This is just lovely !
You DO - Haiku ! !  
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mabel A. Dilley
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9 posted 2001-06-03 01:09 AM


Thanks to each of you for stopping to read. There is a magical time deep in the forest, just as the sun streams through fog: you know that warmth follows, but for a moment all one hears a a forest awakening. ~ Shalom

"I am not now that which I have been."

[This message has been edited by Julian Lester (edited 06-03-2001).]

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