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0 posted 2001-06-02 11:08 AM



In Love's Relate

~*Marge Tindal*~

In love's relate  ~  anticipate
Seek of fate  ~  contemplate
Soar of wing  ~  beckoning
Celestial sing ~ chorusing
Jubilate in love's relate

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-06-02 11:09 AM


SUPERB!
1DERFUL!
And I get to be the first to comment instead of number 37  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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2 posted 2001-06-02 11:10 AM


well i get to be second an i must say this is
magnificent!!  

Logan
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3 posted 2001-06-02 11:12 AM


Fantastic! Marge. and the pic just adds with the rolling thunder of your words...gentle smile
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4 posted 2001-06-02 11:27 AM


InterLoper~
LOL !
Thank you, QuickDrawMcGraw !

KelliKay~
Thanks so much.

Logan~
Thank you for hearing the gentle thunder~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-06-02 02:43 PM


Shall I say this was "electrifying?", nope, then how about, "pyrotechnically awakening?"  Ah, but this was "charged" with "lightning" thoughts, that "charged" my little poetic heart!     You think I liked it?
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6 posted 2001-06-02 04:16 PM


This was great! Good job!
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7 posted 2001-06-02 04:32 PM


Wonderful rhyme scheme Marge, I loved the flow and your sentiments in this treasure!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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8 posted 2001-06-02 04:44 PM


Mysteria~
I LOVE pyrotechnical awakening ... cool !
Iffen I had to hazard a guess ... I might think ya' liked it !

Sandra~
Thank you so much.

Kit~
You're a doll !
Thanks ever so much.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-06-02 04:52 PM


Margie girl you've done it again, this is outstanding, what a beautiful picture you've painted here love. Utterly fabulous writing and I love the picture

You have such a wonderful talent dear sister
and this is excellent
              Love you always
                Take care of you
                   Mushy
                    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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10 posted 2001-06-02 09:13 PM


MarshaLove~
You're such a dear heart ... love you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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