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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-06-02 07:59 AM


The sweet in my Tea

My butterfly lives far from me
But never is she hard to see
Her colors tint the sky all day
Within my mind in subtle play

Her palette is a dozen hues
With gentle green and coolest blues
That fills her brush with softest touch
That pleases me I fear too much.

I look for her each day I rise
Within the mornings mist surprise
And see her magic crystal clear
In everything that’s far and near

She colors all I do and say
As gentle as a flowers way
As sweet as nectar in its store
As tender as the rain in pour

I mix her in my mornings tea
Well just enough to sweeten me.


[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 06-02-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-02 08:08 AM


She shall flit by soon, dear Sy....and you, and Randy, shall sit at tea, with your dear, sweet, friend that be....
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-06-02 09:25 AM


He rings my bells ... and chings my chimes
His winds beneath my wings ... floats me across his sands of time
Building rainbow bridges  ... as our minds entwine
He wraps me in quiet comfort ... in his rhyme divine
Seeing the world thru his vision ... the view is cooler thru his eyes
Perception born of wisdom ... in his words we witness wise
He takes me to Shangri-La ... we walk his beaches of understand
His mind's poetic Eden ... yet we grow when he takes pen in hand
I can think of no kinder gift or honor ... than to be his muse
Thank you "Stinky" ... for painting my world in your golden hues

You gave this tired moth ... Tinkerbell wings to fly
I will treasure you forever ... my sweet poet .. my sweet Sy



~~~~~~~~~~~
thank you Sy ... heart and soul


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-06-02 10:48 AM


Sunshine,
Thank you sweet you brighten my day. *L*

JM,
You have brought me a basket of nectar and I'm afraid I'll overdose. For I love the honey of your words as they in me osmose.
Flattery has added a pound or two.
And Randy just sits and smiles in rue.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

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4 posted 2001-06-02 10:50 AM


I enjoyed reading Seymour..nicely done..very lovely  

                ~Victoria~

                    


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-06-02 10:53 AM


Victoria,
I thank you for the sweet comment.

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6 posted 2001-06-02 11:11 AM


Yes, maybe a slight overdose here
A delightful read.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Watersign6
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7 posted 2001-06-02 11:14 AM


i have no words to say how much your beautiful poem has brightened my day  
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-06-02 11:17 AM



let Randy rue and stew...he knows I adore him too
*winkiewinkie*
(tee he)  

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2001-06-02 12:37 PM


Interloper,
Thank you for the read and nice comment.

Watersign6,
I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem.
Thank you.

JM,
I just knew you were buzzing around.
Love Sy

Poeminister
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10 posted 2001-06-02 01:33 PM


Beautifully sweet. Lovely writing.

PM

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

sans38
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11 posted 2001-06-02 04:18 PM


This was beautiful....I truly enjoyed reading it.
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-06-02 04:51 PM


Poeminister,
Thanks for the beautiful.

Sans38,
Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the read.

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