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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Softly How many times has my kiss lingered softly upon your lips? I dare not count them one by one lest I spoil the pleasure as I miss each one. Jameslee June02,2001 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's it James! Go with the moment! This was so sweet in its brevity! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very few lines and words James but delightfully romantic!! Lot's of room for imagination to fill in here! " I dare not count them one by one lest I spoil the pleasure as I miss each one." I like the sound my perspective gives me for this verse! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...yes the pleasure..the bliss...you find in that kiss...linger there... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it james.. simply lovely..  ~Victoria~
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
Wow...this was lovely. I loved it! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Who needs to count? Lovely, soft kiss of a poem. Joyce |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
WOW! ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oooh, I like this...this is so FINE!!! I especially like how you've ended it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I wish I wrote that! A hearty WELL DONE! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, you created a beautiful mood with this short poem. Few words, many thoughts. I like it a lot. Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, this is just perfection ... simple and pure. Lovely James! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
a few words to create a picture to identify by..very nice, James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
James...this is gentle and soft...I like it...  KIt is to do with tree-ferns: |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this...nicely done. PM |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I liked this form very much. Kathleen Blake |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
James, I truly enjoyed reading this sweet poem you wrote... Hugs2U *~coco~* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
James- simply lovely... ...and here's one more...  wonderful write.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... like the way it leads you to the ending... enjoyed!!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A wonderfully frozen moment in time, in the style of the infamous scene from "The Matrix" of Trinity hovering as the camera dollys around her (but of course much more tender!). -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I love it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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