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Death
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since 2001-05-26
Posts 112
Twilight

0 posted 2001-06-01 09:05 PM


Dispayed in the wiles
      all our
   reactions trials
convicting ourselves
      of being

Dilation of memories
       memoirs
    the chains life
       made us

How quickly   They rise
        surfacing
   In the slighest breeze
        of emotions  
         to breathe

The seeming     shallow pools
         reflecting
       the swells of life
          bring rise
  to the depths of our beings  

I have a friend who once said-"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

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Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2001-06-01 09:44 PM


"The seeming     shallow pools
         reflecting
       the swells of life
          bring rise
  to the depths of our beings"

Capitally said.
Enjoy the reflections of this peice.

PM

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

SilentSongs
Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43
Mist of Time
2 posted 2001-06-02 12:20 PM


Not what I would have thought based on your name. Much lies herein I think.


Thanks for showing

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

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