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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 scarlet imperfections swept away with the current no longer inundate the focus of my waking hours... white tides cleansing my imprudent endeavors will never cease to offset my skeptical tendency... anything ever said to justify... any endeavors made to hide my indulgence... disguises adopted to conceal this offense... futile in the comprehensive scheme of vast absolution... the forbearing flood showering me with calming vapors hinders my view of the transgressions that lie behind... any trace of indigence erased from consciousness becomes the sweet scent of salt permeating the shadows... the seagulls’ tranquil flight quiets me... the waves crashing ashore render me still... garnet reflections on the sand spark my interest... while the air, reminiscent of short-lived pleasure, is eternally refreshed with stillness... -kh 06/01/01 *thanks, JM, for this pic, too...took me long enough, but I did get around to it...  everytime I close my eyes, |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very calming. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the seagulls’ tranquil flight quiets me... the waves crashing ashore render me still... garnet reflections on the sand spark my interest... while the air, reminiscent of short-lived pleasure, is eternally refreshed with stillness... ======================= All this from that picture??whew... I need to see things thru your eyes  wow girl...My small mind is gonna have to read this one a few times to take in all those images and that vocabulary... gonna have to get me dictionary  very cool write SP ... so glad you could find some inspiration from those pics I sent ya... Lord knows my moody muse wasnt gonna use them  well done poetess flake-booty (hehe) (obnoxious) yeppers  Im searchin for my warrior |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this has depth. . . superbly done sp. . . really excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
serene and beautiful. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The sea has always been one with me, but it has been too long, way too long, so thank you for bringing to be with your haunting words...gentle smile |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely, snow...really nice...and the image sets it off perfectly...  KIt is to do with tree-ferns: |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Poeminister: thank you...I am happy you liked this!  JM:  ...I try, I try...hehe...really, thanks so much, m'friend...you flatter me with your kind reply (nothing new)...but I am glad you liked it!!  Sven: well, thank you so much...I am glad you enjoyed!!  brian: thank you...glad you could stop by! Logan: well, I am glad you could get something good out of this...thank you for reading! Severn: thanks so much...glad you liked this! everytime I close my eyes, |
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