Did you ever hear my song - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #14

Did you ever hear my song

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2001-06-01 06:51 PM

Did you ever hear my song
melody of memories gone
some I do pity some I do not
some are fading some are hot
When I sit here by myself
thinking back and I am twelf
just exploring beyond my home
on a leash but space to roam
memories I do have plenty
thinking back and I am twenty
left my home three years before
studies, partying and living fast
shame, but those days didn't last
memories are good and worthy
thinking back and I am thirty
got me a second girl that year
life seemed good, nothing to fear
I wrote my song I did not wait
thinking back I am fourtyeight
a time of sorrow passed me by
when I remember I just sigh
life goes on while stirring it's mix
thinking now and I am fiftysix
still have some melodies to invent
of memories long gone at the end

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-06-01 06:59 PM

i so enjoyed your trip through the past
this is amazing an your talent will last
your one of the finest poets ive ever read
these wonderful thoughts fill your head
your write them down an well its a real pleasure to all of us,enough said..

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-06-01 08:36 PM

ahh, at sixty two, I know what you say, and give you the reasurrance that the best tis yet to come...how nice, how lovely the memories..well done....gentle smile

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-06-01 08:58 PM

A man without memories is dead. Thusly, we celebrate with you the marvelous memories within your poetry. Thank you.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-06-01 09:10 PM

Titia--Beautiful melody of memories. It carries the reader very gracefully.

PM

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.