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Moon Spirited |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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 In the night of my day, when the darkness appears I reach out to touch, "I am almost there" I say to myself, "I think I can" When in truth my resolve, is dissolving again. Spirited moods, by the moon in each phase My life has been canvassed, my heart has been grazed By the treasures I've added, the dusting of you In secret, the paintings I've viewed, shaded blue. "I love you", are thoughts that are lost upon dreams From my outermost silence, my innermost screams Of wanting to hold you in arms, ever more Adorned by your passion, of words that allure. Moonchild in spirit, emotions collide The tides of each dream yielding answers to guide... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Dreams indeed can guide us to many answers we seek...what a lovely gliding poem you've written. Very nice. Poeminister |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poeminister thank you..nice to see you this morning..*s ~Wynter ~I finally found out how to use my geocity pictures stored on my site and I can't remember who to thank, so I thank all reading this..*hugzzz~ "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Moon spirited, indeed you are! Kathleen Blake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Well I think that will rustle up something? Enjoyed. Sy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Poetry at it's best here..... "Spirited moods, by the moon in each phase My life has been canvassed, my heart has been grazed By the treasures I've added, the dusting of you In secret, the paintings I've viewed, shaded blue." Yep I love that kind of stuff ....very good! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
I'm just gonna dream that was about the Man in the Moon. Enchanting. Moonstruck |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"The tides of each dream..." Love this line. You've given me a new image of dreams. Thanks a bunch, Wynter! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Brilliant flow and rhyme! Standing "O" for you, nakdthoughts, Bravo! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wynter--What beautiful images you have gifted with this poem...loved it! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Wonderful images here, Enjoyed this sonnet and picture, Well blended. Gloom |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i so enjoyed this poem an the photo too  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ This write was enchanting~ This is a stunning poetic thought - 'From my outermost silence, my innermost screams' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen.. Sy...nothing rustles much for me..only my feathers  thank you for readingE..you aer much too kind, but shh secretly I love it thank you M lunatic..sure it was about the man in my moon thank youKrawdad ...thank you for reading and enjoying my words VAS..I am glad you thought so huggzz Thank you Martie...your many beautiful words often inspire me. Professor Gloom, thank you, I am often inspired by the words of others, feelings and the moon..all blending *s Watersign6 thank you for readingMarge 'From my outermost silence, my innermost screams'..these thoughts and feelings are so constant..thanks for reading, Marge huggs ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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