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JCGF
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0 posted 2001-06-01 11:57 AM


With alure blue eye's, a mirror reflecting your soul
You make me feel like a woman
You complete my family,
you've made me feel whole.

To know that you are a part of my life,
gives me a sigh of relief.
To understand the passion and love I hold for you,
is beyond belief!

Nothing in the universe,
could replace these delights.
I'm floating, soaring
to immeasurable heights.

For me love in the past
was a shallow shell.
Today, wholesomely,
I'm under it's spell.

Your manneristic poise
exaggerates beautiful art.
Like a poem or a favorite song
it shines in my heart.

Who ever thought or knew that I would be lucky enough to taste your sweet spice.
Now I know God loves me
because he has handed me this wonderful gift
which is YOU!  Christian VanDerslice!

Who knew?  

[This message has been edited by JCGF (edited 06-01-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tammy - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-06-01 01:23 PM


Hooray for love!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-01 06:22 PM


lovely an from the heart  
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2001-06-01 06:26 PM


This is very nice poetry indeed!  Consider yourself very lucky and you've written about it very well!
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
4 posted 2001-06-01 10:37 PM


how incredibly he is to have such a tribute, I only hope he realizes how lucky he is,,wonderful read...thank you for seeing this...gentle smile
JCGF
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since 2001-01-19
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5 posted 2001-06-04 09:57 AM


Interloper - Yes, I love to celebrate love, for I am thankful for the gift of having these feelings.  Thanks for reading and responding.

Watersign - Yes, from my heart is true.  Thankyou for your kind words.

Ethome - I consider myself lucky when people like yourself respond to my words as you have.  Thank you for the compliment.

Longan - I'm flattered that you enjoyed this.  Thankyou for taking the time to read and thankyou for you kind compliments.


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