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Moon Smiling
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Moon Smiling |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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 Among the endless shine of silent stars And constant sparkles from the boundless skies Cheerful smiles are squirted from distant far Sprayed by an impish moon who's yet so shy. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love how you end this one Sudhir..... "Sprayed by an impish moon who's yet so shy." What a great line! Good work my friend! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 now who's being brilliant   I'm hanging on your every word |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
This was simple beauty and a snapshot of thought. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 piece! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the moon shone in this one  Kathleen Blake |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
what lovely writing an thought |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I LOVE any mention of the moon ~ And when she's smiling at you ... a half-world away ... I see her dimples ! This is an inspirational smile you've shared ! Thank you, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sudhir--this is so sweetly original, with your gift of giving me a smile...thank you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Absolutely original...can't say there's a cliche here lol! Never thought of a squirting moon before...love it..  KIt is to do with tree-ferns: |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Just lovely all the way around! A great write indeed! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
really loved it |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
She is beaming down her approval |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Very good indeed,! Thank you for the read Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ethome, my friend, glad that your eyes landed on the line. Thanks, for coming by and responding. Janet, you of course, my friend. Thanks a lot. Julian, a snapshot is a perfect assessment, thank you Interloper, thanks for the gr8 Kathleen, and since you came by, it still is shining, my friend Watersign6, thanks a lot, and I welcome you to passions. Marge, my friend, and I love it when I see you name with this thread. Thank you Martie, I am glad that I am able to bring you some smiles. Thank you Kamla, the uncliched words (is that a valid word???) my 'squirting' thanks to you Saunni, thank you very much, been a long time since I saw your name; welcome back! Watersign6, thanks once again Helen, glad to hear that, thanks Mr Alley Cat, thanks a lot for coming by and your approving response Regards to all, Sudhir |
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