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My Gift To You
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My Gift To You |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
My love, I give to you The greatest gift I have On this blessed eve Meant only for you For now and always Here my love Take my gift Unwrap it slowly Gently lovingly Delight in its beauty I give myself to you Here and now From this day forward No one else shall know The wonder of me Share it with me, love Drink from the cup Lying before you tonight Let it quench your thirst And stir you from within We shall experience New heights together Reaching a plane Where only lovers go To play intimate games Look into my eyes, love Do you see it there? The depth of my passion How I want you near me more With each passing moment I give this gift freely to you Asking nothing in return Love unconditionally Pure and simple I give you my all Tell me, love Your innermost feelings I want to know your dreams Your desires, your truth Share it with me One last gift to you, love Here, take my heart I no longer need it For without you It will surely die My heart, my love Beats for you alone Tend it, care for it Listen to it softly whisper Through the dark night Did you hear what it said? I’m sure you did, love For it professes itself to you Pledging forevermore To love only you All writing comes by the grace of God. -Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 06-01-2001).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Jen~ This is beautiful...a gift of yourself to the one you love...a very lucky man, be sure to remind him of that every day for me ok  it makes my heart soar to seeyou in love and weave it so tenderly, hugs to you my friend~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"I give this gift freely to you Asking nothing in return Love unconditionally Pure and simple I give you my all." That's the most unselfish verse of poetry that I've read in a long time! The whole poem is so full of beautiful loyalty and devotion! Wonderful! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow and triple wow!!!!!!! This is beautiful verse, Jennifer, you did us proud. Kathleen Blake |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Jennifer, This is simply beautiful, full of honesty and heart felt emotions wonderful poetry here thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Holly: Thank you very much for the sweet reply, my friend. When I find a man like this, I'll be sure to remind him!! But, he is just my fantasy for now. I hope all is well for you. We'll talk soon, ok? Take care. (((hug))) ethome: I believe in unselfish love. Yes, I am a hopeless romantic really. Thank you for checking this one out. Kathleen: I am humbled by your response my friend. It makes me smile to know oyu are proud of me. Thanks!! Cerenity: This was written from the heart. I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you. All writing comes |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 I haven't read this? I feel like a dope! LOL!  Well, now that I have read it, I say THIS is what love is supposed to be like. enjoyed! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like the thoughts expressed here...James |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
When these word stay true every day through a thousand years, I guess love starts to flower. I felt your poem was strengthening the bonds between Friends. |
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