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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-01 07:02 AM

Destiny

out in the distance
my destiny
dances with stars
and no matter
where I am
it's never very far
so happy
and joyous
oh how it flows
never very far from me
it follows me
where ever I go
it's in me
it's near me
it's hundreds of miles away
I touch it
I taste it
like tomorrow
was yesterday
destiny
sweet destiny
I can hear you
calling my name
soon
we will be together
one and the same

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 06-01-2001).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

1 posted 2001-06-01 08:05 AM

Gentle...beautiful write...when destiny is
written in the stars there is nothing that
can keep it from coming to pass...Terrific
work~

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

2 posted 2001-06-01 08:33 AM

I can't wait

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-01 09:22 AM

Wonderful poem! I really enjoyed it!

                                        "I touch it
                                          I taste it
                                        like tomorrow
                                        was yesterday"

Neat wording!

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2001-06-01 09:49 AM

Great write and
Congradulations on 500
you new Senior Member You.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-06-01 10:31 AM

How deep your words, Helen.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-01 10:33 AM

Yes.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-01 01:06 PM

excellent. . . just wonderful. . .

congratulations!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-06-01 01:37 PM

I was hoping you'd write something special for the big 500...something just for you! You never dissapoint. BTW, the parade will begin at sunset! I'll bring the confetti!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2001-06-01 01:42 PM

CONGRATULATIONS ON 500!!!!!!
This is an appropriate piece for this achievement.
I've enjoyed watching you reach this far, please don't even think of stopping now.
Always look forward to finding a new work of yours, Helen.

e

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2001-06-01 05:18 PM

I also hear that call and know where it's taking me. VERY nice work here!

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

11 posted 2001-06-01 05:20 PM

Slicklady

Wonderful writing. Enjoyed the read.

PM

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

12 posted 2001-06-01 05:22 PM

Excellent Wonderful an i enjoyed it so very much

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

13 posted 2001-06-16 01:29 AM

"out in the distance
my destiny
dances with stars
and no matter
where i am
it's not very far"

1slick_lady, this is quite an opening statement for such a beautiful poem.
enjoyed reading this very much.

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