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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-01 02:23 AM

Staring at the embers
In the afterglow of love
How easily we moved together
How our bodies fit like a glove

Such exquisite sensations we experienced
In the passionate heat of desire
How exciting was the sight of your body
As you moved with me in front of the fire

As you lay me down so tenderly
By the smouldering firelight
My mind began to wonder
If this was where we'd stay all night

This wish it would be granted
As you moved your lips to mine
Such passion and such wanting
As our hearts began beating in time

The sweet fragrant smell of jasmine
Moved like a cloud around the room
Such a powerful aroma
So easily it made us swoon

The taste of love's sweet nectar
I sampled from your lips
As we became one with each other
And you moved above my hips

Love's ride took us on a journey
To heaven and beyond
Away from all our worries
Where you and I could abscond

How much I will look forward
With such anticipated delight
When you and I next rendezvous
Beside the warmth of the firelight

Suetang

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

1 posted 2001-06-01 12:54 PM

I'm burning up over here! Wonderful expression of passion and love! EXCELLENT!

Hugs,
Tammy

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-01 01:21 PM

Wow. Light the fire.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-06-01 03:39 PM

sounds familiar haa..i had a few jasmine nights with someone from melbourne haa..

nicely done

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 06-01-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-06-01 03:51 PM

lots of good images here but I'd love to hear more specifics!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-06-01 05:07 PM

Aha...some hot desire by the fire...James

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-01 05:49 PM

whew! i have to take a breather,its gettin a bit hot in here

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-06-01 06:27 PM

Thank you all for reading this one, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote this strictly from imagination on a cold Autumn day here in Melbourne.....I guess it was maybe a case of wishful thinking?? Take care......Sue

Suetang

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