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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2001-06-01 01:15 AM



Banked up high with tumbleweeds-
Rims now red with rust...
Axles dry...no sign of grease-
The bed is filled with dust.

Bones half buried in the sand-
Eye less skulls observe-
The place where they played out their string...
They had no lack of nerve.

Pioneers who failed to cross-
The desert, bare and wide...
The rolling wheels are stilled at last-
For here the settlers died.

The driver fought his lethargy...
Long hours he rolled on-
He’d make it if it killed him-
Two long weeks out from home...

He only swerved a little bit-
While rubbing sanded eyes...
He never saw that semi parked-
And thus a driver dies.

Those rolling wheels of life and time...
Do measure out the miles-
Allotted us upon this earth...
The heartaches, tears, the smiles...

Methodically we roll along...
Down grades, and up the hills...
Till time, and tide, and destiny-
At last our journey stills.

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-06-01 01:18 AM


I like the way you started out with the pioneers and brought us to nowadays. All wanted to get somewhere just all didn't make it for whatever reason.
Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-01 07:01 PM


you tell this truth so well from past to present wonderful  
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-06-01 07:22 PM


Well done, love it.

Titia

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-07-03 03:50 PM


I do so love your stories, Mr. Gun--reading your work reminds me of watching one of those "television" art instructors...they make it look so easy and always so amazed by finished work!!!  
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-07-06 06:58 PM


this is great, flowed like a river!


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