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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-05-31 11:01 PM

cantilevered

can
tile
lever
shelves?

red
in the face
one gets
to put an end
to an end
where a life stays straight
and I see then an unswerving

when I see this word
two ends come to mind, holding up
a middle
of sway

mostly I think….

[………………bridges………………]
linking

one to another
day to dark
me to you

but then my mind works that way

never do I think of
cantilever
without the word
sway

perhaps I was too close to San Francisco
in another life

perhaps

it is because I sway in my mind
and cantilevered shelves

hold my thoughts
……………perhaps……………

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-05-31 11:38 PM

I like the way your thoughts sway...very creative.

Poeminister

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-01 12:00 PM

Now that was quite the balancing act of word placement and creativity, good on your girl, I liked it!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-06-01 04:31 AM

Karilea,

Not only is this poem interesting, but also the way your mind works. Know what? I like both.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-01 10:33 AM

We could call your mind the Golden Gate, but that name is already given. Why don't we just say you are magnificent and leave it at that?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-06-01 10:39 AM

I have a dreadful fear of bridges, but I sure enjoyed reading about them.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2001-06-01 01:07 PM

Kari dear heart utterly beautifully balanced and presented. What can I say dearest this is fabulous.

Now I send this back to the top where it can balance perfectly

Take care
love and warm stuff
Puck