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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 05-31-2001 09:33 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Captivating Music

captive
the music swelled
as fingers dipped in milk
black to white’s full orchestration
met me and thee in express symphony
grand piano which seized the keys
black & white would greet we
in this spell, held
captive
bass black I wore
swerved in music’s own chord
sway of hip met greet of eyes’ groan
click of heels’ intent, low one’s heart did moan
sweet a dream to meet in music
dark met day in sun’s light
in this spell, held
captive

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-31-2001 09:35 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is captivating, indeed.....
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2 posted 05-31-2001 09:36 PM       View Profile for Watersign6   Email Watersign6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Watersign6's Home Page   View IP for Watersign6

Sunshine play that music an write that poem
for you please us all so when your talented words flow  
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3 posted 05-31-2001 11:06 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

This pulls me in...love it  
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with you


4 posted 06-01-2001 11:36 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

YEA!!! You do these wonderfully!!   aren't they fun  
JCGF
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Wow!  What a soothing melody.  This is breath taking.  I had to read a few times.  One of my favorites.  Thank you for the read!
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Sunshine,
Well this captured me. *L*
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7 posted 06-01-2001 12:54 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I was drawn to these words...

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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Kari dear heart, utterly fabulous, captivating music, captivating shape love. Oh that you should write words of wonder, always Puck is running to catch up Persephone.

Absolutely fabulous work and yes I love it don't I always
(Mmmm but only because it's perfect  )

Take care love as always
                    Puck
                    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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Marvelous write Karilea!  The format is a real eye catcher too!    What type of black is this?

"bass black I wore."
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shhhhhhhhh. . . I can hear it now. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Deep in the heart


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Be still my heart!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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click of heels’ intent, low one’s heart did moan
sweet a dream to meet in music
dark met day in sun’s light
in this spell, held
captive
I am dancing as we speak....

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

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Yanno...that looks like a single castanet to me, and then off my imagination went, but you don't want to hear the journey!  Nice read Sunny one!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

~*~Please remember to tell someone you love them today~*~

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14 posted 05-16-2009 02:46 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Sunshine,

I think this is the poem that has been calling to me in the archives tonight.  I am gonna leave with this one tucked under my arm.  I am keeping it - so there!  

Love you,
Alison
 
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