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Passions Gallery: Charisma (the world around her)
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Passions Gallery: Charisma (the world around her) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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through her eyes we see stories of the world around the world around her short stories of life told with the words of the heart flowing on the page the images form we begin to see her world the world around her ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very nice writing Sven  |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Your halls fill as your gallery expands with its beauty. wonderful again, Beautiful Heart. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A lovely Senryu tribute to our Charisma...I think she'll like this very much. Poeminister |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Nice write for charisma A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ws6, thank you!! Temptress, yes, it is getting bigger by the second. . . thank you. . . Poeminister, thank you. . . I hope that she does. . . Bernie, thank you for reading. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sven enjoyed this very much. Charisma does have a way that tells about "the world around her" through her poetry. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
How very lovely this is. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely sven..and she is lovely too ~Victoria~
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
im loving this poem...great job sven...beautiful words ...until next time...i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts Sven...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent description of her Sven. There's nothing more I can say! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, I think you fly around the world meeting the poets just to interview them prior to placing them here in your Gallery... you know them so well! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
inot2b, thank you. . . glad that you could see her in this one. . . Titia, thank you my friend. . . Victoria, thank you. . . yes, she is isn't she?? albert, glad that you enjoyed as always. . . thank you. . . James, thank you for reading my friend. . . ethome, glad that I got the description right. . . Sunshine, I wish!!! LOL No, I just read them here. . . that's all. . . thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Charisma is so very lovely and you captured her essence verywell in this senryu. I am sure she will be blessed. KokoAloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven....I really don't know what to say, as you really have touched my heart very deeply....I just came home from a short vacation and couldn't read your wonderful tribute earlier....I am so honored that you have done this for me.....thank you ...my dear...dear friend. (((warm huge hug))) Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhh how could I forget to make a thread to my library....done by now. Charisma |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yup, isn't what sharing our writing on the forums is all about...sharing the world around us...cool motto, Sven!! |
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