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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-05-31 06:08 PM



Oh sweet, salty SEA
always fanning the bright flames
comfort is easy
~*~
searching fingertips
seductively explore you
increasing the heat
~*~
dance between the sheets
wild, writhing, matching tempo
your skin is burning
~*~
the touch is searing
the mercury is topped out
we struggle for breath
~*~
we rest together
lips topped with perspiration
so salty tasting
~*~
our tongues intertwine
our passion is remembered
we begin again

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-05-31 06:11 PM


WOOO HOOOO!!! Love this my sweet friend.....wonderfully done!!! Let the rumors fly!!!  
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2 posted 2001-05-31 06:46 PM


My goodness this Texas boy is hot!!!!!
Enjoyed very much!!

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3 posted 2001-05-31 07:06 PM


SEA ~ YES! And, thank you.

inot2B ~ Hopefully, you know from experience

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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4 posted 2001-06-01 04:21 AM


Sheesh someone had me my fan!  Who turned the heat up in here...this was Texas-style "rajun cajun"    Great!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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5 posted 2001-06-01 05:03 AM


Oh goodness...whew...

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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6 posted 2001-06-01 09:45 AM


Mysteria ~ I will not take offense that you mixed Texas flavor with that of a clearly inferior state ... Louisiana

Now, doan get on me Wynter  

Auguste ~ Here is a towel, go take a cold shower  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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7 posted 2001-06-01 10:35 AM


oh my goodness, rumors?  I ain't sayin' anything...it's only poetry right?     

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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8 posted 2001-06-01 10:38 AM


Irish Rose ~ Aye, colleen, "only" poetry.  But don't we have fun here?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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9 posted 2001-06-01 11:53 AM


yes folks....only poetry....and smiles and warm fuzzies.....and friends who understand we are just playing   got it?!
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10 posted 2001-06-01 12:09 PM


Lips topped with perspiration.  I LOVE IT!
Wow, this is great writing.  What passion.  Thanks for the read!  

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11 posted 2001-06-01 01:05 PM


SEA ~ No, you're going to ruin my reputation as a ladykiller    
What fun we DO have here!

JCGF ~ I think your first time to visit my work.  
Thanks for the read and fine compliments.


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-01-2001).]

BrightStar
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12 posted 2001-06-02 11:20 AM


Ooooooooooh, LUCKY SEA!
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13 posted 2001-06-02 06:37 PM


Dare not dampen the passion, let the fish have wings

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