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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-05-31 01:52 PM

moments ago

a coming,
        though in moments ago

my lifetime circled
        in this touch

of moments ago

your finger traced
        that which is yours

just moments ago

does one spiral upward in flame
just by touch?
                                    yes

ah, this moment
                               now gone

left lingering, this feel, like ivy, climbs
twines
rhymes

that moment of you

in truth,
in just
in senses that in a moment

was the lifetime, met

was the lifeline, set

no regret,

in this moment

  of that moment ago

       I shall spiral upward in flame,

                                                         yes

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-31 01:56 PM

I liked the format you used on this one very much!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2001-05-31 01:57 PM

I shall spiral upward in flame,

yes

enjoyed the poem, the last part was especially beautiful.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-05-31 02:34 PM

And this poem leaves a lovely lingering feeling...I like this very much.

Poeminister

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:50 PM

Lady flame...Yes, yes and yes!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-05-31 03:50 PM

woohooo! you Rock with the words,oh yeah!

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

6 posted 2001-05-31 06:32 PM

Oh my I think the flame
turns to a bonfire
surpassing sky reaching
singing rise soul rise

You burn from inside out
and I am molten metal

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

[This message has been edited by ArticulatedSigh (edited 05-31-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-05-31 06:37 PM

WOW!
And you are taking me up there with you.
WOW!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2001-05-31 07:39 PM

...Sigh...sigh ...

...what else is there to reply

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-06-01 04:41 AM

Decaflame,

Sometimes a moment is all it takes to fill a lifetime. I know you don't understand what it is that I'm talking about. Just know that it is so, my friend. Just know...

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-06-01 04:42 AM

yes......says it all! Yes this likes me!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

11 posted 2001-06-01 07:57 AM

So soft and gentle the words flow...just like
the touch from the hand you speak
of...beautiful write~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2001-06-01 09:41 AM

You sure spiral upward with poetry! This is delightful!

"Left lingering, this feel, like ivy, climbs
twines
rhymes.

What a great illustration that is.....great writing Decaflame!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2001-06-01 10:33 AM

and it spiraled perfectly to the end....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2001-06-02 12:42 PM

DecaFlame~
Oh .... this is wonderful !

'my lifetime circled
in this touch'

'no regret,

in this moment

of that moment ago'

Doing a little circling myself~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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