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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
0 posted 2001-05-31 01:14 PM

black orchids flying
gray contrails smear blue sky
birds soar with flowers
© Copyright 2001 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
1 posted 2001-05-31 01:52 PM

Mike,
I love the minimalist approach in forms like this but I have this insatiable habit.  I hope you can indulge me:

Contrails fly with birds
soaring grey smear in blue sky
Black orchid flowers

(Thanks for feeding my habit)
Kraw'
Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
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2 posted 2001-05-31 02:02 PM

Kraw...this wouldn't happen to be one of your obsessive-compulsive disorders, would it?*G*

Thanks for commenting and the write.

Mike
theLadypoet
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 97
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3 posted 2001-05-31 03:20 PM

Hello,

Took my breath away!
Hauntingly lovely.
Thank you for the privelege
of reading it.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt
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