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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-05-31 08:18 AM





In the Shimmer of a Candlelight

Close your eyes and release your mind,
leave your pain and sorrow behind,
let me lead you through the night,
in the shimmer of a candlelight.

Close your eyes and relax my dear,
while my love is coming near,
temptation is growing tense abound,
let me discover this place beyond.


Sweet promises whispered by my sweet lips,
The light softly touch from my fingertips,
When they slide lightly all over your skin,
Feeling the vibration that comes from within.


My fingertips caress you softly and sweet,
Searching their way going slowly beneath,
Sweet sensual smooches, so softly and fine,
My tongue that meet yours, passionately entwine.


Trembling lightly while we explore,
Satisfy the desire longing for more,
with every touch we feel the temptation,
losing control, so tense in anticipation.


Oh your sweet love is really so intense,
I Drown in your love and loss all of my senses,
Involved through our passions, so wild and so sweet,
Feel how our souls confluent, each time that we meet.


Close your eyes while I'm holding you tight,
together we explored the cherished heights,
soft whispering words are coming through,
whispering tenderly "I love you".


Charisma
~*TMP*~
oktober 2000


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1 posted 2001-05-31 08:23 AM


I, for one, want to thank you for reposting this lovely piece of art. How sensual it is, with the candles shimmering!  Great writing, Charisma...as you always do!!    

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2 posted 2001-05-31 08:44 AM


I love candle light, it's so tranquil....shimmer on  

~ Ruth
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3 posted 2001-05-31 09:49 AM


I'm lighting a candle right now!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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4 posted 2001-05-31 10:03 AM


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5 posted 2001-05-31 03:08 PM


So tenderly written...Candlelight is the
perfect setting to romance and words of the
heart...beautiful heartfelt writing~

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6 posted 2001-06-05 12:40 PM


Thank you all for your lovely replies, and I am glad that you liked it. Your comments are all very highly appreciated by me.

((hugs))
Charisma

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7 posted 2002-02-04 08:40 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, may you forever share the beauty and passion of true love forever with your love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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