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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-05-31 07:51 AM




Shhhh...walk softly in the night,
or you will wake yourself from your dream...

Dream on...of long walks on the beach,
long walks with your hand in that of your lover...

Each step a step on the journey of life,
free from the cares of the waking world...

Walk with bare toes wiggling in the sand,
walk gently...step silently...

Don't look back...keep your eyes closed,
feel the night ocean breezes kissing your face...

Listen as your lover calls your name,
don't stop...just  listen...keep walking...

And soon enough,
you will wake...

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


© Copyright 2001 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
SilentSongs
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since 2001-05-31
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Mist of Time
1 posted 2001-05-31 07:54 AM


Yes more than  soon enough, awakening hurls us from our bliss. In dreams or waking, it appears that is the way of dreams.

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2001-05-31 07:59 AM


SilentSongs...
First of all, I'd like to welcome you to the family!!  You'll love it here, and we're glad to have you pull up a chair and join us!
And also, thank you for your reply...yes, dreams are very powerful stuff!!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
3 posted 2001-05-31 09:01 AM


Sunny

I just love it.  You must be reading my mind for I feel every word that you have written. Very nice my friend - I have missed talking with you.

A

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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4 posted 2001-05-31 09:48 AM


enjoyed very, very much and your picture is fabulous!~

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2001-05-31 12:36 PM


Ariana...
Oh, I am so glad you came by to read this, and we will talk again soon.....

Kathleen...
I thank you so much, and I didn't think the new picture would go up that fast! Wow, those guys at the top are really good!!


The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 05-31-2001).]

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-05-31 04:38 PM



Dreams........Dreams......If we could only dream forever .....

Thank u for such a beautiful soft dream  

*************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
7 posted 2001-05-31 06:11 PM


MyEnchanted_Melody...
and may all your dreams be peaceful and sweet, and also a very hearty WELCOME to this wonderful home we call Passions!!! Make yourself comfortable and settle in, as you are now part of the best family on the net!!
  (Thankyou for your reply too!!)

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-05-31 06:27 PM


What a sweet dream!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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9 posted 2001-05-31 06:43 PM


Ahhh, such dreams . . .
like a breezy kiss that steals your breath . . .

Brad Majors
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Georgia
10 posted 2001-05-31 07:10 PM


I like this in what ever forum I see it. Very well written!
Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
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Hurricane,WV
11 posted 2001-06-06 08:42 AM


i enjoyed this one so much  
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