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Mendy
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 34


0 posted 2001-05-31 05:44 AM


When you see me,
why does your heart beat in fear.
This isn't war paint
just the colour of my skin.
Why must you scurry and hide
When I un noticing stand by your side.
You could resist,  I believe
when you see me
glisten in the summer heat
Shoulders held back, proud
Shaven head unbowed.
Why do your eyes seek mine
then dart to one side when they find
I have eyes too.
lips, mouth, frown or smile
just like you do.
I get on one lift,
you wait for the next one.
I offer you a seat,
you say you don't want one.
I smile at you,
you bow your head and run.
What do I have to do.
to finally get through to you.
I DON'T WANT YOU,
Consumed by the fear I do.


if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru  

[This message has been edited by Mendy (edited 05-31-2001).]

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-05-31 07:13 AM


Aw he's just shy, but he really likes you a lot and you were able to capture that idea with your words. I enjoyed!
Watersign6
Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-05-31 07:22 AM


how wonderfully well written,i thoroughly enjoyed it an will look for more by you  
vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
3 posted 2001-05-31 11:10 AM


enjoy
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