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ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

0 posted 2001-05-31 05:05 AM

Words expose me
    reveal  you
breathing without noticing
      speaking without saying

  Anything Anyone there at all

How quaint the cornered
     dusting so rare
to open to the light our
      ways and means ignoring life

  More Devious in motion made

How we devise each
     and every plot
roles we play out assume to
      hide ourselves outside ourselves

  Leave the Inside an abandoned Ruin

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-05-31 09:48 AM

helloo....echoes through the ruins
of dust motes hiding
              and caliginous corners
in which to scurry...

in division of devise
     corner there me not
for sometimes, some time is needed
to stand without
                  to look
                             within...

Thank you for your poem....you have inspired this....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-05-31 11:48 PM

ArticulatedSigh~
This is a refreshing write !
Enjoyed it all ...
but REALLY like this thought~

'How quaint the cornered
dusting so rare'

Nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-06-01 12:04 PM

Words expose me
    reveal  you
breathing without noticing
      speaking without saying

  Anything Anyone there at all

How quaint the cornered
     dusting so rare
to open to the light our
      ways and means ignoring life
========================

very very cool poem...
so layered amd complex in its imagery...
Welcome to Poetry Land...
your name is very cool as well,
nice to meet you
take care
jm

I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breathe

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597