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Open Poetry #14

Mist Of Hope

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

0 posted 2001-05-31 02:12 AM

join the night
   walk with me
     see your world
       in shadow light

why not prefer the night
to live in shadows eye
as all things end in
Dirge of Dreams

for darkness softens sight
no sun to blaze way through
fog beliefs to stand twixt
mirror and thy and I prefer

shadows seek not sustenance
fluid servants live emulating
your dreams of yesterday intangible
in day real in dreams of night why not

join the night
   walk with me
     see your world
       in shadow light

I have a friend who once said-"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-05-31 02:19 AM

Very interesting write. I enjoyed the read!
Welcome to Passions!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-05-31 03:33 AM

"join the night"...

"for darkness softens sight"

I tend to be more a nocturnal creature than a daytime one...so this poem appeals to me. Well written.

Poeminister

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

3 posted 2001-05-31 04:20 AM

Hi!
do you prefer simply "Death"
or "Mr. Death"?

nice, and in the shape most think of you
(look at the shape, it's like a hooded figure).

me, i want to meet the friend...tom

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

4 posted 2001-05-31 04:30 AM

Thank you all for your words so very kind.

And simply Death will do. And I rarely wear black.

Odd that such images still are sustained born of a different age, of different plagues.

And the friend will be informed of your wishes.

I have a friend who once said-"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

5 posted 2001-05-31 05:19 AM

Mist of Hope

I rememeber hope, at least cereberally.

Thanks

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

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