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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-30 08:08 PM


*Gallery Reading Room*

Angel of the night
hold me in your arms
and cover me
with your wings
guide me to your dreams
and let my
tender heart sing

Angel of the night
take me to your heart
and heal me
with your love
house me in your soul
and clothe me
like those above

Angel of the night
kiss me with your lips
and fill me
with your heat
hold my heart in dreams
and make my
life complete

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2001-05-30 09:17 PM


Sven - I know that your angel is on the way my friend, just hang loose, she'll arrive. Very well done writing Sven.

BC

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2 posted 2001-05-30 09:35 PM


Sven this is so soft and sweet, a request from your heart. If I should see your angel I promise to send her your way.
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3 posted 2001-05-30 11:21 PM


very sweet sven...

                  ~Victoria~


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4 posted 2001-05-30 11:31 PM


filled with romantic longing!
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5 posted 2001-05-30 11:32 PM


Sven,

This is beautiful. Great writing.  

                                     Dawn

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6 posted 2001-05-31 12:38 PM


Sven, this is soooo beautiful! It will happen, it will!  

Sauni

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Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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7 posted 2001-05-31 12:54 PM


oh Sven what a sweet lovely piece you've penned here....I guess that even an Angel of the night can't resist such wonderful words.....I know as I can't resist such a romantic piece.......love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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8 posted 2001-05-31 12:56 PM


Gaurdian of the dark
set my soft wings free
let me rest beneath your cloak
hold me in your arms
and we will fly.

Gaurdian of the dark
whisper sunsets
and delay the rising of light
at midnight will you love me
with a touch?

Gaurdian of the night
I'll unfurl my wings
and "kiss you with my lips
and fill you
with my heat
hold your heart in dreams
and make your
life complete"

"In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..."

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9 posted 2001-05-31 01:01 AM


you are not the only one still looking for their angel...but i promise to keep a look out for you

true beauty comes from within not from without

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10 posted 2001-05-31 02:22 AM


sweet...and touching piece...beautiful writing sven  ...thank you for sharing...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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11 posted 2001-05-31 02:25 AM


Sven,
Wonderful piece.  I like this very much.

Poeminister

ethome
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12 posted 2001-05-31 02:27 AM


Sven this is amazing poetry!  Always a treat to read your work!
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13 posted 2001-06-05 09:00 PM


what a beautiful   poem you have written  
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14 posted 2001-06-06 12:39 PM


Stunning....Sven....always lovely from your pen...


Lauren~

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Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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15 posted 2001-06-06 01:00 AM


Angelic and yet dreamy... what a poem. I really enjoyed the read.  
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16 posted 2001-06-06 06:05 AM


hold my heart in dreams
make my life complete

now you have expressed my longing beautifully...

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2001-06-06 07:10 AM


Sir Sven, my friend,

you are indeed king of romance...

regards,
sudhir

Sven
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18 posted 2001-06-06 08:00 PM


thank you so much everyone. . . I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, and that I was able to speak to your hearts. . .

special thanks to Angel of Music for her wonderful poetic response, to faterider for telling me that I expressed his longing. . . and of course to Sudhir, for crowning me once again. . .  

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