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walker
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0 posted 2001-05-30 07:48 PM



The softness of your hands,
have contributed to my demands.
I want to have you each night.
Desire is difficult to withstand.
With your kisses,
I've learned to speak,
voicing my love to you has been easier,
every time I indulge in you.
Controlling this passion is difficult.
But I know I have to,
because to love you like I want you,
would only scare you away.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-30-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-30 07:51 PM



Sven
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2 posted 2001-05-30 07:53 PM


I doubt that you would scare anyone away walker. . .

this just fills the page with passion. . . great job. . .

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JLR
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3 posted 2001-05-30 10:44 PM


Intense desire yet control...intriging combination.  One I doubt I'll ever master.  Well done!
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4 posted 2001-06-05 02:13 PM


well written and i love this one  
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5 posted 2001-06-05 02:37 PM


(smiles) Oh, dear friend, with a beautiful tender love like yours, you could never scare your love away, your love would desperately want to have you! (sigh) I know that feeling where it's hard to control passion; I've been feeling very lovesick lately as I continue to hold onto my passion for loving a girl, but in the end, I know it's all worth it and her soft hands will always be over you! (sigh) You are a true romantic, sweet Walker! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-06-06 03:02 AM


Very desireous passions flowing...beautiful write.

Poeminister

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7 posted 2001-06-06 03:15 AM


a passionate poem... reach for her... good luck.
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