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SEA
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0 posted 2001-05-30 07:09 PM



Sweet Interloper
comfortable with the heat
let me fan the flames

~*~

seductive touches
from warm fingertips...slowly
temperatures soar

~*~

the dance now begins
one step closer to the fire
feeling the burn yet?


~SEA~


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-05-30 07:16 PM


Very lovely senryus your wrote there, love them much much much  

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2 posted 2001-05-30 09:46 PM


Oh boy, I felt it!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-05-31 01:23 AM


Definitely!  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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4 posted 2001-05-31 01:40 AM


oh my Sea....very cool indeed ....  
great senryus my friend

((hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2001-05-31 02:59 AM


                                        "Sweet Interloper
                                    comfortable with the heat
                                      let me fan the flames"


I don't know how passionately close he got to you but it seems like you didn't mind his encroachment and were able to handle it quite well....great writing!

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6 posted 2001-05-31 07:24 AM


SEA~
Gal, you are just TOO COOL !
Enchanting enticement ...  
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-05-31 08:26 AM


Yes!!  
The dancing and the fire just had to pull in this gypsy heart!!  SEA, this is wonderful!!
Now, on with the dance...

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


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8 posted 2001-05-31 08:41 AM


You've been posting some passionate pieces as of late....nice to see you well and happy  
SEA
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9 posted 2001-05-31 12:25 PM


thank you all very much.....I was just playing off a reply he made on a different post of mine......it was all in fun and nothing personal about it so the rumors can stop..........
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10 posted 2001-05-31 06:08 PM


NO, do not stop the rumors.  
It is all true!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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11 posted 2001-05-31 06:42 PM


I like the way this flows together. Seems Interloper is going from the frying pan to the fire.
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12 posted 2001-06-01 04:32 AM


Touche'  

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

OLIAS
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13 posted 2001-06-01 06:54 PM


Great work Sea, a cool write for a hot poem I liked.

Regards,
Olias.

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14 posted 2001-06-02 11:23 AM


Oooooooooooooh.  Lucky Interloper.
Watersign6
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15 posted 2001-06-05 07:59 PM


all i have to say is it makes me   and i
am   for you and your talent

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16 posted 2002-02-04 08:37 PM




Mmmmmmmmm...very passionate indeed, I bet you really made him smile when he read this, this is hot and lovely! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words always delight my day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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