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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-05-30 05:12 PM



Rainbow Heights


Rainbow sky blooming high
a dream's aurora in the eye
inhale garish beauty multi
nuanced stratas expanding
befalling all within a sigh
of the opening soaring heart
with wings to rainbow heights


Poeminister


"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



© Copyright 2001 Kevin Rainbow - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-05-30 05:13 PM


Please, please quit making these look so darn easy!

Bravo!

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-05-30 05:22 PM


you keep doing these and I'm gonna have to try them! I don't think I have enough Advil for that!! LOL These are wonderful!    SEA
JLR
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3 posted 2001-05-30 05:28 PM


Bet you're one of those people who says they can't even draw a straight line, huh?  Loved this!
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-30 06:30 PM


very talented

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-05-30 06:30 PM


Incredible!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Victoria
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6 posted 2001-05-30 06:47 PM


Good job..beautifully done..

                     ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


ArticulatedSigh
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7 posted 2001-05-31 05:46 AM


Oh is this nice. I am so very fond of Acrostic form. Nice job, very nice.

Thanks

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
8 posted 2001-05-31 05:54 AM


outstanding acrostic rainbow

((hugs))
Charisma

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-05-31 07:15 AM


That's a marvellous peace. Never tried doubles myself. Love it

Titia

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ethome
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10 posted 2001-05-31 07:22 AM


Beautifully and cleverly done!  These lines I like the flow of....

               "befalling all within a sigh
                of the opening soaring heart
                with wings to rainbow heights."

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2001-05-31 08:59 AM


Wow...a tough challange you gave yourself here and you flourished in both form and content....nicely done  
Poeminister
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12 posted 2001-06-01 01:54 AM


Decaflame--   They getting easier the more you do...thanks for your stopping by.

SEA--I hope you do...Thank you.  

JLR--Thanks.  Glad you enjoyed.  

Irish Rose--Thank you.  

Interloper--Thank you for your kind comment.

Victoria--Thank you.  Glad you liked this.

ArticulatedSigh--Thanks for reading and for kind reply.  

Charisma--Glad you enjoyed.  Thank you.

Titia   Thank you  

ethome--Thanks.  Always appreciate your kind comments.

Hoot-Glad you good fly by. Thank you  

take care,
Poeminister

Watersign6
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13 posted 2001-06-06 07:25 AM


Poeminister-YOU ROCK  
Poeminister
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14 posted 2001-06-06 12:18 PM


Thank you Watersign, and you do too  
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