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2dalimit
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Mississippi coast

0 posted 2001-05-30 02:57 PM



I’ve been a biker most all of my life
Long before I took a wife
After my birth and before I could walk
Even before I could talk
A little red tricycle was my first
A two wheeler made me curse
Then, of course, the Harley, my pride and joy
I became a MAN, from
b o y
I’m over fifty, the wife can’t believe
The change that’s come over me
I’ve got a grasp on life, with a new plan
Mid Life, Comes a Mini-Van

© Copyright 2001 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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1 posted 2001-05-30 03:38 PM


Heh heh this is a cute one I really enjoyed it! My how times change!
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
2 posted 2001-05-30 05:26 PM


You're just as old as you feel (or think you are)LOL   Love this poem.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-30 05:31 PM


Didn't know Harley Davidson made a minivan.  Ha!
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-05-30 06:44 PM


Well, at least it's not a rice burner

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2001-05-31 02:25 PM


ethome
Titia
JLR
Interloper

Thanks for commenting. I already went through the mid-life. I thought it would be funny to reverse roles.
Melton

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
6 posted 2001-06-01 02:07 PM


Oh, oh, oh, you are a MAN, full-fledged! With sageness to boot!

Enjoyed this one.

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
7 posted 2001-06-01 06:17 PM


well Harleys are way kool but ive never rode one,have seen a few i would have liked to
anyway ive had 2 mini vans an i wrecked one an then my brother wrecked the other,neither wreck was our fault either someone else pulled right out into our path while driving
anyway..this is a very cute poem indeed..

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-06-02 08:54 PM


Well get on your bad motor scooter and ride!!  
very clever write...
enjoyed the wit and edge of sarcasm
well done poet sir

Im searchin for my warrior
walkin the tracks of time
this struggle to seek forgiveness
like chains and shackles...these ghosts of mine

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
9 posted 2001-06-03 01:44 PM


VAS This grandpa needs the extra room. Thanks

Watersign6 Thanks. I glad you enjoyed it.

Janet Marie The truth: The last time I rode was about 10 years ago and my wife has a firmer grip on me, now. Thank you.
Melton


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