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RMW
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0 posted 2001-05-30 01:29 PM


Meniscus

Concave?
Convex?
The answer rests
Upon the sides,
Though I supsect
The tension lies
Beneath the surface.

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1 posted 2001-05-30 01:32 PM


I would suspect that as well....

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 05-30-2001).]

Panne447
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2 posted 2001-05-30 01:33 PM


RMW- super! Panne
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3 posted 2001-05-30 02:30 PM


Bob..just the reflection of a smile you make.

PS--you made me look up a word and that's a good thing.  

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4 posted 2001-05-30 02:50 PM


very clever!  
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5 posted 2001-05-30 02:53 PM


This is well done Minimalism.

Yet if i recall tis the Surface tension keeps us afloat.

I did enjoy your write.

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

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6 posted 2001-05-30 04:15 PM


Ahh, a silver sliver of a moon
revealing only what
she wants
us to
see.


Wonderful poem, Bob.

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7 posted 2001-05-30 06:41 PM


I belive it does, by golly  
Well done, Bob.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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8 posted 2001-06-13 02:28 PM


Oh I agree... the tension lies beneath the surface...

as always an insight from your words..


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