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Marge Tindal
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Almost Forgotten ...

~*Marge Tindal*~

Out of nowhere you came
Sneaked right up on me
A tear from so long ago
I'd almost forgotten I cried you
Touching memories within a teardrop
I remembered how good it was
before it wasn't anymore
I'm thankful we had the time
to write memories of one another
But, please, don't come 'round too often
cause I don't know what I'm gonna do with you now

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-30-2001 08:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Marge sometimes those old memories come back uninvited...James
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They are the sneakiest little devils, those gasps of yesteryear....
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3 posted 05-30-2001 09:21 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

                          "But, please, don't come 'round too often
                    cause I don't know what I'm gonna do with you now"

Amazing how that can keep on affecting you long after it's over....ah that tricky thing called love!

I love it Marge!
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4 posted 05-30-2001 09:39 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

oh Marge you describe these memorizing feelings so well in a few words.....
excellent as always

((hugs))
Charisma
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This was very much enjoyed, my friend...

such an amazing feeling to read what you write...
regards,
sudhir
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Margie girl, I love this one it's one of those memories that trickle down and pool in your heart. Look inside the tear love, it's full of love, and this is full of beauty, even if its whistful beauty.

Absolutely excellent writing love
Take care always
                 Mushy
                    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Marge Tindal
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JamesMichael~
They do, love ... at the most unsuspecting moments.

Karilea~
Yes ... they're like that alright.

ETHome~
But it's never really over, is it ?

Charisma~
*Hugging* you in thanks.

Sudhir~
Ahhhh !  You read my heart.

MarshaLove~
I love it when memories gather me in gentle recall.
Love to all.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I think all those 'pasts' make up a piece of who we are today. The good and the not-so-good memories will always reside in our heart, right where they belong! Great expression, Marge!
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Denise~
Thank you for your perspective ... total agreement here ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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you have such a true gift an i am happy an i
enjoy it so much  
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Nice try!  You never get rid of those little suckers, never!  Nice poem though.

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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Only number 12 this time
Have I mentioned that I really like your work?
I really like your work!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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KelliKay~
Thank you always for your sweet replies.

Mysteria~
LOL !
I think someone put my longitude/latitude
in memory's flight simulator~
Those little recalls just keep zeroing in on me.

InterLoper~
Now serving 'thank you' to #12 ...  
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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"A tear from so long ago
I'd almost forgotten I cried you"

Sometimes we forget the tear but not its bitter taste.......

How I wish we can forget them all.....

Thank you for such a touching poem
****************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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EnchantedMelody~
Oh, hon ... I feel the tears of memory at the oddest moments ...
and feel the sweetness that they bring.

Well, that's my story ... and I'm sticking to it.

Thank you for the read~
Welcome again ~ to Passions !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge, then there are times the old memories make you smile and cry at the same time. Sometimes a memory will come and you just stay in that thought all day not knowing what to do with yourself...but to just feel it. Whatever it may be, happy or sad. Great write as always.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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Saunni~
You sometimes make me feel that I've written just for you.
That's a nice feeling.

Yes ... the tears very often bring a smile of sweet remembering.
I truly never mind the tears when they fall for someone I've loved.
*Hugs* to you, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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very nice, Marge, when all is said and done, the good memories are all that we really want, so take them and smile softly with the rememberance...gentle smile
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oh how I know this so well, and how some of those misplaced memories can haunt you....peace to you, and hugs as well....


Lauren~


***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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Marge--there is no almost in forgotton...memories come, they come.  Hugs!
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you expressed my sentiments perfectly...except that i haven't yet gotten the strength to write about it...
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Logan~
Thank you for the gentleness of your reply.

GreenEyes~
*Hugs* ... those memories return time after time,
as though they need to remind us that they are worth remembering.

Martie~
And then they come again - from out of a clear blue night.
Love you, my friend.

Kaile~
I wish you the strength to pen it in time.
Thank you for the reply.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I remembered how good it was
before it wasn't anymore

And there, you've described my entire thinking process these days (punctuated with periodic screams of WHY? *G*)

I like this, Margie, gal...
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SuthernGal~
I know ...

Always remember - that in a remember ...
someone else has the same good memories to ponder also ...
And in some quiet moment ... whether they want to admit it or not ...
they do remember ...
That's only fair, isn't it ?

*Hugs* sent your way, sweetie.
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com               

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-07-2001).]

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