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And Now Begins Forever
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And Now Begins Forever |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Now begins forever Now is where it starts Now begins the entwining Of two lovers hearts. Now begins the promise That was given with a kiss A promise of forever Wrapped in moments just like this. Now begins the passion That sultry eyes ignite No touch could quite compare To that look of passions flight. And now begins forever And forever and ever again Loves not lost this promise A promise of love without end. With a special thank you to a wonderful man...for the inspiration |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
a very lucky man indeed, to inspire such tender words..very nice...gentle smile |
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WhiteOnyx New Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 9New Zealand |
Very simple, and elegant. Im no Shakespeare, but I know what tugs at my heart strings, and that is definitily one poem I can empathise with. I hope your happiness lasts at least forever  WhiteOnyx |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Now begins the entwining Of two lovers hearts. Now that's all it takes, go to it girl!!! |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Oh to be caught in that one moment you have described for eternity! To know that you and the person you love are standing on the edge of a beautiful "forever" and walking forward together. I envy you, my friend :-) Very well done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ *Hugging* you in joy ! Two hearts beating as one Caught up in full measure Rapturous joy beyond compare A very special pleasure Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts and desires...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, Paula Kathleen Blake |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
...Now begins the promise That was given with a kiss A promise of forever Wrapped in moments just like this... The special kiss does last forever and a day. Nice and romantic. Melton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love without end is the way it's supposed to be! Ah it might become familiar but it becomes comfortably familiar...seasoned with strength and not having to prove your still you! Great poem Paula! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula my sweet sister with words like this love you are as grown as you can be. This has so much beauty in it, and oh how my heart bounds with joy at seeing you write such heartfelt lines love. YOU are writing pure wonder these days, you klnow I love this one right? (I know you guessed, well, I might have known you would dear heart!) Take care love and warm stuff as always Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Logan...I am the lucky one...his friendship is a cherished gift...thank you WhiteOnyx...I'm glad it tugged at you...thank you inot2B...lol yes its astart isnt it? rascalx...hey babe long time no see...how ya been? Thanks for your sweet words... Marge...you grace me with a verse of your own lovely lady I thank you James...you are so sweet my friend...thank you... Kathleen...Im happy you find it so...thank you 2dalimit...yes it does...it lingers like a memory on the lips...thank you ethome...yes the way we dream of huh? Ifwe just let it happen... Marsha...YOU are too kind...you go to my head like fine wine...thank you sweet sis |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
He must be quite a man Paula...for her gave you the inspiration for this most beautiful poem~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How 1derful! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent poets can take a line, or a thought, and weave them into a beautiful work....you have done that here..hats off to ya, Paula |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Holly...he is a pretty special friend...thankyou Interloper...lol thanks I like that Balladeer...  you are very sweet to say so sir...thank you |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A wonderful poem of devotion I wish you and your inspiration all the happiness in the world. Regards, Olias. |
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