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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-05-29 11:35 PM

The soft night breeze came to be,
Whispering a soft “Come to me.”
It mattered not, my name was gone,
It didn’t care of who I be,
Only that the voice was heard
Sent upon the gentle breeze.

A soul cried out upon that breeze,
Only wanting to be free,
Free to be what they were
Not shackled to any they serve
Desperately wanting to be shown
A soul can always be reborn

I sent the breeze back to thee
To whisper to you tenderly
To thee you are, as ever was
A gentle soul, unfailingly
Take my hand and be set free
To know your worth internally

Feel this breeze upon your face
Leaving you in a state of grace
A soft caress upon your cheek
Lets you know you were seeked
To let you know, you were heard
The breeze had sent your tender word

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-05-30 12:39 PM

Oh Logan...how truly lovely this breeze...so fresh and soft upon my cheek...words whispered on the wind

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-05-30 12:53 PM

I've felt this soft breeze
and tender it should be

enjoyed this write, Logan.
thanks

Krawdad
/:-}==
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Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-05-30 02:16 AM

On whispering breezes are the smiles and spirits of gentle ones like yourself. Lovely work, Logan. You put yourself into these as you do everything else. Another reason to treasure your words. Ohh..and did I say that I'm thrilled to see you posted again?

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-05-30 02:40 AM

These two lines were my favorite Logan:
Take my hand and be set free
To know your worth internally
As they sum up what a good relationship truly is all about, giving, trust, self-worth, yet independence - great poem, and great writing.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2001-05-30 07:51 AM

very beautiful, I love it

"to let you know, you were heard
The breeze had sent your tender word"

sighhh

Maree

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-05-30 08:10 AM

to be heard and touched are two of the most basic human needs. ENjoyed.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

7 posted 2001-05-30 11:50 PM

To each and all of you, I have read your words and works and you do me great honor to acknowledge me with your responses and thoughtfulness. Thank all of you... gentle smile

Paula, my neighbor above the line, Irish Rose, of the heather..Krawdad, from an interesting state...ahh Temptress..gentle smile..Maree, who reminds me of the sea..Mysteria, a name most apt, who talks with the old ones..thank you all again.

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