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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-29 06:47 PM


I'm hearing that song again
the song of your heart
filling me again with the
lyrics of your life
telling the stories of a love
discovered new

playing on the radio crystal clear
each note sweet and pure
each word from the heart
I turn it up
and sing along

and when your song is done
I take the melody with me
the notes filling the air
and
the lyrics of your life
filling my heart

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-29 06:52 PM


Such a wonderful capacity you have, Sven.  Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


inot2B
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2 posted 2001-05-29 07:37 PM


Great words to describe the song of Saunni. As always you have out did yourself.
anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-05-29 09:36 PM


wonderful discription through words...beautiful and lovely as always...thanks for sharing,sven

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Passions Voice
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4 posted 2001-05-31 11:58 AM


I've been following this series with much interest.  You've done well with them, as usual.

Great job.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-05-31 12:01 PM


Sven,
That should do it, nice write.

JLR
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6 posted 2001-05-31 12:34 PM


I take the melody with me...I believe you've captured the sweet, sadness of her song!  A precious addition to Passions Gallery.
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7 posted 2001-06-01 02:23 AM


I'm behind in my reading.   Nicely done, Sven.  

Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-06-01 02:59 AM


Another wonderful tribute from your pen...well done.

Poeminister

Sven
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9 posted 2001-06-01 01:13 PM


Interloper, thank you. . .  

inot2b, outdone myself??  Wow. . .  . . . thank you. . .

albert, thank you as always my friend for reading. . .  

PV, thank you for reading and for following. . .

Sy, it does it for me. . . thank you. . .

JLR, I'm glad that you think so!!!  Thank you. . .

Temptress, that's ok. . . they'll always be here. . . thank you. . .

Poeminister, thank you. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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10 posted 2001-06-01 06:45 PM


Sven you've done it again.lovely writing my friend  
Saunni
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11 posted 2001-06-03 08:07 PM


Oh, Sven, I did not realize this was on here! JLR asked me if I had seen it. I want to thank you so very much! This must have been on here on one of the days I wasn't online and is why I didn't respond! Oh, I can't believe you did this! It is beautiful! No one has ever written about me or for me, I usually do the writing. If I may ask, what made you write this? Thanks again...  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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