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Our Love Is Strong
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Our Love Is Strong |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Don't you see Into my eyes, It shows everytime we come by And yet we feel our love Isn't strong, We get apart, Like a flower petal falls, Everytime , I hear you call, Let me know you, Love, Eyes, Love Is strong, As long as we stay alive, No one will hurt us, Our love Is strong, Like a sun goes around the world, Yet , We feel love Isn't enough to light our eyes to shine, But I do feel love Is enough , Our hearts belong to one another [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice vandana...James |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Grovy, great poem ... Love has to be the strongest force on earth - it can start wars, silence the bold, and repair the hurt . Enjoyed it . Many Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and in that strength, we find each other. . . excellent vandana. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very enjoyable  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
thank you for your kind replies glad you all liked it very much In fact,I have wriiten so many poems and didn't decide which to send over here,so I DECIDED to send one of my old poems  |
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