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With A Song In My Heart
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With A Song In My Heart |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ With A Song In My Heart ~*~There's a song in my heart that I sing at times, It’s missing some words, some rhythms and rhymes. The words are a blur, somehow they just hide, But I can feel the love that lives there inside. It is a love song, of that I am sure, As I search out my soul, to find the cure. At times I hurt, as the song is deceiving. It saddens my heart, and I find myself grieving. My love is so strong, but my heart feels so weak. Is my heart broken, could there be a leak? Am I your Princess? Is this song from you? Are you just a dream? Are fairytales true? My heart sets sail on the breeze of your love, As thoughts go wailing through clouds above. I awaken at night in fear from my dream. One tear turns to another, creating a stream. My heart will go on waiting for your return. I hide behind your sun, in hopes I wont burn. I have nowhere to run, and nowhere to hide, My heart keeps saying it wants you by my side. Another lonely night, turns into morning light. The song my heart sang, turns into black and white. My eyes slowly open and now it’s all clear, Hugging my tear-soaked pillow, I pretend you are near. art: Frederick Lord Leighton "Flaming June" 1895 ~www.primenet.com~ music: My Heart Will Go On ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely flow and rythum and rhyme to this poem! It was so easy to cascade down the page reading this! Beautiful picture! Thanks for sharing this! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you know I like this, now you do, don't you.... |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
~*~sighs...~*~ Oh, Sharon...how enchantingly beautiful...but you know me these days...love songs and love poetry has this very profound effect on me lately (~*~smiles~*~) Extremely...~dreamy~.... Hugs and much love sent your way, dawn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah...I see I got some romantics out of the blue pages, and I am so glad you liked this one, thank you. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
an now ive got a song in my heart after reading this thanks to you Mysteria,thanks  |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Beautiful flow and ebb to these words. I sailed down the page. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Absolutely lovely. If such a maid wrote such a song To such a man as I... Twould be far more than I could bear- I fear I'd likely die! And if the object of this work- Can read without one tear, His heart is dead within his breast... This much is very clear. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mabe: I am glad you enjoyed it. Gunslinger: Well your response was certainly beautifully done, thank you for reading this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Ahhhh ! The stuff romantic dreams are made of ! ! Love the tender render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I loved it....... The cascading flow the simple rhythmic words and the beautiful image........ This touched me ........ ---------------------------- "I hide behind your sun, in hopes I wont burn." This is a really beautiful and powerful image... But can we ever trust that we won't be burned by the sun? Thank u ...... It's only me.......only me |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mz. Marge: Ah...but I have had the odd romantic dream  Thank you!My Enchanted Melody: It truly makes me happy if someone likes what I do, and you have made me very happy thank you. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Your poetry is amazing! I did a smart search and have read lot's of your work. I could stay here all day waiting for you to write and then I could read and read and read again. You take me to another world that I never imagined existed. It's hard to believe that this is all free! Thank you so much for sharing your talent. Hugs, Tammy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fairytales can come true it can happen to you if you're young at heart Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Watersign6 ~*~ Ah...you were hiding there, sorry I missed you, and I am glad you have a song in your heart, good! Tammy ~*~ Thank you for your encouraging words, as sometimes my muse goes to "goofy" places, and I think I travel alone! Interloper ~*~ Now you are not going to beleive this, but that is what I was listening to when I decided to write this, an old Frank Sinatra song was playing! Thank you for reading this. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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