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Open Poetry #14
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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-05-29 02:56 PM


Shall Eternally be,
Fairy Princes free,
Memory on eyes that love,
cradle new friendship
confusing push & shove;

Holding on to peace & place,
social gifts a pretty face;

Wedding rings from birds that sing,
falling on waiting finger,
metal thrown above the clouds
to land where a Princess may linger.

Where she stands the air is sweet,
every dream turns up neat,
she folds the story during sleep,
edges corners tucking treats,
ironing smooth true gliding feats;
© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-29 02:57 PM

oops...not finished, right?
ethome
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2 posted 2001-05-29 03:04 PM

Good piece of poetry ! But I'm with Sunshine and just wondering...thanks!
helen smith
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3 posted 2001-05-29 03:53 PM

what  a sweet one Craig... you write so tenderly ..beautiful
thecraig
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4 posted 2001-05-29 09:14 PM

Please help with an appropriate close.
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