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StarPhantasy
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since 2001-05-29
Posts 5
Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2001-05-29 12:35 PM




I'm not a man of many words,
But yet what is a man?
I'm not sure what I'm doing here,
or even who I am.
My soul is filled with fear,
as people break my heart,
I can't tell you who I really am,
And I don't know where to start.

I wondered if God was really there for me,
When I've thought about suicide,
But in my heart I know it's wrong,
So I'm glad I never tried.
There is a coldness in my heart,
A storm of sadness and pain,
For some reason I always feel
As if I'm left out in the rain.

Gossip is seldom times never true,
But so many people believe it.
I have driven myself into a hole,
And I don't know who dug the pit.
They pushed me in, And spit on me,
I didn't care on bit.

My friends turned against me,
Because of such lies,
I'm in my own little world where everything dies.

)*E*(

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-05-29 01:42 PM


Those are sad feelings, lucky for you, you shared them with us, we're friends, good ones, believe me.

Don't let gossip get you down, just be your honest self. Honesty always wins in the end you know. And people who keep believing otherwise, well they don't deserve your friendship, cause friendship can only be build on a true heart.

So cheer up, let those sorrow thoughts fade away, keep writing for us and keep smiling  , it sure would make you feel better, knowing you're among friends now.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-29-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-05-29 02:20 PM


He was with you.  He is always with you, but asking/believing helps one realize He is and allows Him to be closer.  

a favorite chorus

"Turn your eyes upon Jesus,
Look full in His wonderful face
And the things of Earth will grow strangely dim
In the light of His glory and grace."

Thanks for sharing yourself that we may believe on your behalf, especially until you recognize your own belief.

zzz
Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55

3 posted 2001-06-06 10:03 AM


friends who turn against you in your hour of need were not really friends at all  come out from the shadows of your gloom and search for the sunshine life is always worth living even if sometimes it seems its not every new day brings new joys to find start searching
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-06 10:14 AM


No reason to wonder where God is.  Who do you think was in your heart during that terrible comtemplation?
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