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vandana
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0 posted 2001-05-29 11:11 AM



More than.....
More that friends,
More than words,
Words to say,
Words to an open book,
More than everything,
We want,
Words to all the way,
Words to say,
More than everything we want,
More than anything,
More than that,
More than love,
Love that flows ,
More than
what we might think,
And more than.......
More than wind blows,
More than words we write,
And out of an Ink ,
To each each word,
More than anything,
More than everything,
Everything we listen,
More than that,
More than........
  
    
          (one of my best effort and favorite poem)

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-29-2001).]

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-05-29 11:14 AM


There are all kinds of poetry that call to one's heart...

I can see why this is one of your favorites...

Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-05-29 11:12 PM


Yes more than anything...I know this feeling
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-05-30 07:09 AM


SweetVanDana~
Your words are more ...

Delightful read of your heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-30 09:24 AM


Your heart definitely shows in this one.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Charisma
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5 posted 2001-05-30 09:35 AM


love it Vandana.....enjoyed the read, and saw a lot of more between the lines.

((hugs))
Charisma

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