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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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random narrows, ridges the ocean, creating the illusion of disguises with a prize, leafing apart the in-betweens, shadowing out the truth, no matter where it entails, there is bound to this necessity. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wow this is deep....Ive missed ya |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cool, How deep ? There is a lot of meaning in this poem, it took me a whole 3 reads before I realised what you were saying in the whole there must be something behind everything . This poem is very reminiscent of some of my early poems, which were also very deep . Have you read any poems by Enola ? she is one of my mates, search for her under the archives, her poems are quite often very like yours . Enjoyed it a lot, thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I missed you too paula THank you for the response angel. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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