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Watersign6
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0 posted 2001-05-28 10:16 PM


"If"

If there would be no light
how would we see?
if there would be no light
how would we speak?
if there would be no light
how would we love?
if there would be no light
how would we find the person up above?
if is a tiny word
that makes all the difference in the world

(c)2001 Kelli Kay

© Copyright 2001 Kelli Kay - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-05-28 10:38 PM


Tiny words seem to be the ones of most importance.  A nice thought to ponder on..with a gentle smile..very nice
Saunni
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2 posted 2001-05-28 11:21 PM


Yep! It's the little ones that mean the most! Nice write here.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-05-29 06:52 AM


thank you Logan an thank you Saunni  
Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-05-29 10:21 AM


reminds me of the child who continually asks "why"....

and to my child, I would respond, "why not?"

Well done!

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-05-29 10:37 AM


it certainly does!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Watersign6
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6 posted 2001-05-29 11:04 AM


thank you Sunshine an Irish Rose for taking time to read mine  
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