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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-05-28 03:58 PM

Whisper like stars whisper in the night
like the moonlight whispering upon the sea
whisper the way the night whispers of love
come! let us make love, whisper tenderly

Let me feel shadowy lips upon mine
in the soft bed of pale moonlight
beneath the blanket of darkness
come make romantic love to me

Fingers of the wind sing like a violin
serenades our dance of contentment
we tremble like two cymbals in the night
tambourines of ivory stars shining bright

Hold me until the stars' no longer shine
Sharing our love like bougainvillea vines

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 05-28-2001).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2001-05-28 04:03 PM

WOW Victoria.....always lovely from your pen...

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

2 posted 2001-05-28 04:09 PM

oh Victoria,my my you have done it again,just beautiful

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-05-28 04:40 PM

*sigh* so romantic and I love romance. This flowed with tenderness. I love it. Thank you so much for the read. {{{BIG HUGS}}}Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-05-28 05:21 PM

Hi! Good to see you again..This is a beautiful romantic piece. Just the way it SHOULD be..
Sandra

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-05-28 06:14 PM

Love this. Very beautiful.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

6 posted 2001-05-28 06:18 PM

woooo, i love this especially because you put bougianvillea in it, i love them there my favorite,
and i live in hawaii so i'm very lucky to be around them.
thank you for your words

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-05-28 06:47 PM

Thank you Lauren and for the nice memorial
day card too...glad you liked

watersign6..thank you and im so happy you enjoyed

startime..hi startime..nice hearing from you..so happy you peeked in

sandra..hope all is well..thanks for peeking in hon

poeminister..thank you so much..appreciate your nice comments

redheart angrybraids
im so glad you liked..i use to live
in hawaii too and had them growing across
the top of my garage door...glad you enjoyed

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

8 posted 2001-05-29 10:18 PM

lovely, lovely, Victoria..as the mists creeping upon the low hills from the sea whisper their spell upon you..ahh, you say it well and with feeling...gentle smile

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-05-30 01:03 AM

oh my the poet above stole my line, I was the one who wanted to say lovely....lovely....Victoria...see now I only can echo her...cause its really a lovely piece.

((hugs))
Charisma

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2001-05-30 09:25 AM

Thank you Logan..i enjoyed writing this poem..nice to hear from you

Charisma..thank you so much..i hear your echos in the wind haa..HUGS

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-05-30 06:27 PM

this is a lovely sonnet, Victoria

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-05-30 06:29 PM

Good to see you writing again.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2001-05-30 06:46 PM

thank you kathleen..HUGS

interloper..Ive been offline for a while but nice to be back..thank you so much for peeking in..

~Victoria~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2001-05-30 07:40 PM

enjoyed it a lot

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2001-05-31 05:29 PM

Victoria I enjoyed your writing and the bougainvillea...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2001-05-31 06:40 PM

Thank you vandana and James..thank you for peeking in today..nice to hear from you both

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

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