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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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0 posted 2001-05-28 02:11 PM





Should
one
brave
dare
cave
explore
true
love's
source

Tap
well
discover
succulent
passion
uncover

Probe,
open
release
treasure
palpitate
exquisite
pleasure

Savor
molten
heat
desire
heightened
sensory
over
load
fire

Dwell,
linger
tender
kiss
press
claim
quixotic
prize
yours,
guess...
who's in love?

~Tier
5/01



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2001-05-28 02:14 PM


~What word selections you've made. A feast indeed. Well done here. *Peace.
Tiersdin
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2 posted 2001-05-28 02:18 PM


Thank you, Spitfire, *smiles*


~Tier

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-05-28 02:50 PM


Oh I do like this one a lot.

Titia

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2001-05-28 02:54 PM


Fab words you've made good use of in this piece. It gets quite hot too I must say!
Good work!!

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
5 posted 2001-05-28 02:54 PM


Thank you kindly, Titia & Ethome!

:-)

~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-28-2001).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2001-05-28 03:07 PM


*sigh* I think that is an easy one to answer. I so love reading work from those in love. This was wonderful and very sensual. I loved it. {{{BIG HUGS}}}Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
7 posted 2001-05-28 04:35 PM


absolutely loved it  
Tiersdin
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east coast
8 posted 2001-05-28 08:43 PM


Thank you, Startime and Watersign6, I'm glad that you both like!

*smiles*

~Tier

Sven
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9 posted 2001-05-29 07:00 PM


how many guesses do I get Tier???  

love this one. . . you've played with these words excellently. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-05-29 10:16 PM


You can play with my words anytime ...  

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
11 posted 2001-05-29 10:35 PM


Love it...wonderful write.

Poeminister

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
12 posted 2001-05-29 11:33 PM


sensuous
sensations
dripping
down
down
down
the
page


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