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In The Wake of Your Nightmare
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In The Wake of Your Nightmare |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Ivory silk gown trailing as the spring breeze swirls about her Open fields of emeralds wave as though saying goodbye Crescent moon fogged in by distant clouds, far beyond reach Lyrics of old love songs carried to heart, melodies taken from one’s soul Time and place foreign, but so familiar Faces obscure, yet ones we recognize A voice cries out through the night, a blood curdling scream As you bolt upright in your bed, you wonder That scream…was it mine…or hers…? Annie Lehberg 05-27-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The contradictions of this...held me. Well done! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Dear Whisper, Lovely imagery and descriptive thoughts in this. Very nicely done. Poeminister |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You startled me. Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have described it very well. I have woken because of a scream only to realize it was my own. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a slight shudder here. . . you can feel the confusion in this one. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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