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Ocean’s Rhythm
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Ocean’s Rhythm |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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  © Phillip A. Wrobel © James D. Watt ********* Ocean’s Rhythm Waves rolling, rushing over the edge Salty Ocean splashes millions of drops Whenever she meets rocky line Hugs him with endless needs Flowing thoughts of oceans depths Within the secret of sacred life Sometimes she wants to share As she opens her blue virginity To show her inner treasure Corals of gorgeous beauty Rare oysters imply within a plea of oceans mysterious future Don’t rape her innermost beauty Respect her sacred depths Breath of life she shares Within so many precious lives Float upon stream of restless waves Ocean’s rhythm guides rushing stream Charisma ~*TMP*~ 26/05/01 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Charisma, I am enjoying the cool of this very much...thank you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ This is absolutely stunning ! ! 'Sometimes she wants to share As she opens her blue virginity To show her inner treasure Corals of gorgeous beauty Rare oysters imply within a plea of oceans mysterious future' I've not read a lovelier piece so laced with the beauty of the sea. You deserve a big HUG for this one ! One of your finest, to date. Thank you - thank you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Take me to the ocean...James |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
enjoyed this very much,thanks  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sunshine: glad you enjoyed the cool of the ocean, thanks for your nice comment. Marge: Hugs right back at ya, glad you like this one and enjoy the beauty of the ocean too. JamesMichael:well were are you waiting for...come on take my hand so we can go by now. watersign: glad you enjoyed it. |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
From one that doesn't even know how to swim, I sure would like to take the big splash..;-) Prachtig! [..never get tired from your works..thank you!..;-)] adoeiii shawneee |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Charisma what a wonderful write this is! You have written a beauty! Such grace and flow to the whole work! |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Oh! ... ... Oh! ... ... Jaime |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I have so missed the visions you weave with such beauty, dear one. Thank you this is a fantastic poem and I loved every bit of it.{{{BIG HUGS}}}Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! I live on the ocean, and I have to tell you I have read a ton of poetry of the sea living here, and none did equal this beauty, stand proud, this was absolutely a stunning piece of poetry. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is lovely, with sparkling images. Sandra |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Living nearby the sea, I love it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your lovely replay, I appreciate them very much. Love you all. Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo enchanting, sweet friend, coral reefs are one of my favorite things in the whole world, their colors and the fish always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May the rhythm of the ocean forever chant sweet music and inspiration to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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